It’s not just about starting a story—it’s about snatching your reader’s attention before they even settle into their seat. A great first line doesn’t wait. It doesn’t whisper. It doesn’t knock. It kicks the door in and dares the reader not to follow. So, what makes a first line memorable? Let’s dig in.

Whether you’re building a new world, introducing a complex backstory, or creating high-stakes conflict, the temptation to explain everything right away is real. But dumping too much information too quickly can kill your story’s momentum, overwhelm your reader, and break immersion. Today’s Tony Tips Tuesdays™ is all about avoiding info dumps—and instead, mastering the art of showing, sprinkling, and layering information throughout your story.